Original:
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conclusion to marijuana being more tolerated on a global scale, we can see the
positive and negative perspectives of marijuana. Whether you are for it or
against it, marijuana plays a big role in today's societies.
Revised:
In conclusion to this essay, we can see that the creators of south park are for the legalization of marijuana. They use multiple examples through out the episode trying to show how silly it is that the drug is illegal. I find that the method they use to try and convince their audience to agree with their opinions are very persuasive. I personally agree with the episodes ideas, and I feel that you should as well.
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